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On that night when I first saw you
I knew I was sent to timbuktu
And I didn't know if it was your stories or not
But I couldn't stop smiling, as I was taught

It might have been that hug you gave me
That sent my heart to the moon with one beat
And when I shook with each touch
I knew I cared way to much

I try so hard to find you
And I try so hard to see you
Since I want you to see me how we could be
'Cause I really think that we could be happy

Happy in the strangest of ways
Happy on the worst of days
With you by my side, I don't have to worry
About all those, scary stories

Of all those heartbroken
Because I know I'm no token
For you to toss aside so quickly
Don't leave me hanging here

I try so hard to find you
And I try so hard to see you
Since I want you to see me how we could be
'Cause I really think that we could be happy

So I really try
To find my heart in this sea
Of Love and misery
Don't you want to find it with me?

I try so hard to find you
And I try so hard to see you
Since I want you to see me how we could be
'Cause I really think that we could be happy

Don't you want to find it with me?
Don't you want to find it with me?
:iconcassidytragedy:

Author's Comments

X3 Ahhh. Okay.
So I wrote these new lyrics, to an old piano melody I wrote a couple years ago, but the old lyrics never worked right.


So, thoughts?

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:iconsomuchluv:
cant quite think of anything to say other than i like it, but im sure it has more of an impact with the actual music xDD;;

anddd
i think you should put this in: romantic > teen or young romance > song
;]]

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I've nudged my way into your life,
and you've nudged your way into my heart. :heart:
:iconsabre-toothed-wolf:
cool! you seem to let go of the structure about 3/4 of the way through or so it works but. . .

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"My friends say I'm crazy
And I agree
But that's okay
That's the way I like to be"
~Hey Girl - O.A.R.
:iconhinoyurei:
nice! sung it out some and one thing i'll say is you might want to tweak the second line because of the "timbuktu."

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